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Poetry Feelings

Poetry is a way to express feelings.
Poetry rhymes, it’s for girls, it’s boring.
It’s too hard!
Writing poetry is not part of the new standards, no can do.
I like reading poetry, but I’m no poet.
Poetry is something we do after the testing, so can you come visit our school in June?

We hear these arguments all the time, from teachers whose own education consisted of serial lessons in the follies of perfect form (points off for downbeat dyslexia) and “what does this really mean,” intimidation.  From welcoming principals who smile indulgently as if a visiting poet is something akin to birthday cupcakes, a useless indulgence inducing real school work interruptus. From curriculum directors who aren’t necessarily poetry adverse but have been benchmarked into scripts and graphs that only track the results of timed bubble tests and not careful or critical thinking.

First…on the feeling thing?  Maybe.  But, I’m mad, I’m so mad, I’m very very mad, grrrrrr may be writing about a feeling, but it is hardly a poem.  Poems are more often first person narratives, linking images to words that evoke a response in the reader or listener.  Poetry demands that we stop, look, and listen, noticing the details and putting them into words.  Spoiler alert, basically, the world doesn’t care if you are hurt, angry or elated.  What they are interested in is when you the writer draws on images that make the say, ah, or whew, ick, or ouch.  Don’t believe me?  How about this from perhaps the most quoted poet of all time:

Poetry is about experiences.  And that means the experiences we have in a flower strewn meadow, inner city street corner, kitchen table, or science or math class.  In order to write a poem we have to look at a subject carefully and contextually.  We have to think about it.

Poetry can take a lot of different forms, but it is definitely not a cupcake.

Poetry is the water and flour.

Bury the Beret! Nurturing Artists in the Classroom

Is artistic talent inborn or can we cultivate it?  I have always of an artist as one who
envisions what wasn’t there before and, through knowledge and experience, makes
it happen.  In an article I wrote years
ago, The Poet as Patriot (Journal of Children’s Literature, v23 n2 p42-46 Fall
1997), I bemoaned the fact that the art room had been moved down the hall,
outside of our typical classroom.  Since
then, the art room, along with recess, has been moved right out of the
school.  Useless! Is the cry.  Not rigorous. And worst of all from a
tap-every-potential-market stand point, Untestable.   

Our vocabulary is SO not up to date.  Go to google images and type in ARTIST and up
pops a picture of a cartoon character in a beret.  We are apt to define an artist as not only a
person with bad taste in hats, but also 
  1. Someone on the outskirts of society 
  2. A person who makes up stuff that may get a response out of others, but is really not productive in a societal sense and 
  3. Starving (see 2. re: non productive).    
Why doesn’t an image search reveal a picture of
Steve Jobs or Arianna Huffington?  How
about plastic surgeons who construct intact smiles out of cleft palates or
engineers who build skyscrapers out of glass and football fields out of old
tires?  Are these people not
artists?  What’s worse than the
perception adults hold of artists is the fact that we are teaching this same
vocabulary to our kids.  I sometimes ask kids at school visits to go home and tell their parents that there was a poet and school and then suggest that now that they think about it, they would like to grow up to be a poet and watch the parental response.  It’s a good laugh line.  A real knee slapper.  Even third graders know that their parents don’t want them to grow up to be artists.


Michael and I
just got home from an art show at the Geauga Nature Preserve where one end of
the room was consumed by a big poster, “What if Art Ruled
the world?”  My response?  It does! 
Look around.  The people who come
up with the new technologies and problem solving fixes wind up in charge.  The administrative types whose eyes are
trained to look backward at precedent, only studying what has succeeded in the past, are doomed to
fail.  I don’t know if that is economics,
poetry, or basic math, but it is true. 
Ask the executives at General Motors who first laughed at the
introduction of Honda cars in the U.S. and said, “let the kids buy those
toy cars, when they need a real car, they’ll come to us.”  Ahem. 

Any profession taken to its
highest level becomes an art form, a place where we take knowledge and
experience to create something new.  The
label has become so stigmatized over the years that we keep coming up with new
names for artists.  We call them entrepreneurs,
inventors, creative problem solvers. 
Maybe if we started calling the artists in our midst by their true
names, we wouldn’t be so hesitant to spend some time nurturing artistry in our
schools. Seth Godin in his article, 3 Essential Skills Every Entrepreneur Should Cultivate, cites three qualities to nurture: 1. Quiet the Lizard
Brain, which means silence the resistant part of your brain that is responsible
for fear and rage. 2. Think like an artist, where he notes that, “Art requires
the artist to care, and to care enough to do something when he knows it might
not work,” and 3. Connect the disconnected, this he recommends as a route
to problem solving.  I haven’t read this
guy’s book, but I like his line of thinking in this article. It
gives credit where credit is due — to the artists and the risk takers.   

I hate when a well-meaning
educator introduces me to a kid at a school as: This is our poet.  It discounts the other kids in the room or
school who are also nurturing poetical observations and metaphorical connections they just haven’t found the
words for yet.  Or maybe they will never
express themselves in words, maybe they will use mathematical equations,
chemical formulas or organizational genius.  It implies that as
long as we have one kid with a poetic eye in our midst, the rest of the kids can (should?)
stand down, not risk their own self expression.  The fact is, every one of
them will need the careful, observational skills of a poet at some point.  They will need to be artists, to draw on their creative abilities to problem solve. 

As Susan Ohanian points out so eloquently in her article: Against Obedience Critical Education, 3(9).,  “We need artists, bakers, lumberjacks, manicurists, welders, and yurt builders,
as well as people who study math and science in college. Let’s respect the
variety of skills needed in our communities–and make sure everyone receives
a decent wage.” Of the wild flower bouquet of skills needed to make society function, we need an artist at the velvet heart of every blossom.

Enter uniform proficiency tests
and standards that reward conformity and compliance and it becomes evident that our schools may not be preparing kids for all of their tomorrows.  Being able to black out little boxes with a
number 2 pencil is not going to help students care for future families in a
precarious world.  We are feeding these students
a false narrative: If you fall in line and memorize what we ask you to, you
will reap rewards.  Not true.  If you are creative and an evaluative risk taker who uses
knowledge and experience to make stuff up, that’s what is going to put food on
your table and advance your pursuit of happiness.  In order to respond when the future asks, how do we position this product? How can we cure this malady or design this
to be more efficient in terms of cost and resources. H
ow can we expedite this
procedure?
 The adult, 2.0 versions of
the kids sitting in classrooms today will most likely be collaborating and
making up stuff like crazy, connecting all kinds of disconnected dots and
inserting a few that weren’t there before trying to service the needs of future
generations and clean up the messes previous generations have created.  Successful adults are their own bosses,
whether working inside of some institution or self-employed.  Kids will need to be so much more than compliant.  

We need to find a way to reward
thoughtful risk taking in school. Eleanor Roosevelt advised, “do one thing
every day that scares you.”  We need
an assessment rubric for that one, accomplished, showing signs of progress, or
needs improvement. Or make this a criteria for assessment: Student applies logic in assessing risks.  How about: Student demonstrates an ability to
discover and achieve as part of a team
(not involving a ball)?  Or: 
Shows unlikely but valid connections across content areas and is able to
communicate ideas in a convincing manner using words, images, coding, mechanical
devices or movement
. Where is the
assessment rubric for curiosity or tenacity? Most of all, schools need to stop buying programs that promise to help kids on tests and start looking for ways to foster creativity. Toss the fill in the blanks worksheets and bring back the crayons and blocks.

We need to bury the berets and
bring out the true artist in every child, every day, in every academic discipline. 

Having Principals

I first met Principal Seamus Marriott and his wife
Theresa in Wisconsin at a Walloon Institute and later traveled to work at his school
in Shanghai, then in Cairo, and most recently in Balikpapan. Not only did he
invite us to great locations, he helped us plan side trips, introduced into
other schools, fantastic teachers and enthusiastic kids, and even took us for a
spinning time at a Scottish Ball.  While
we have had a great time working for him in each location, the visit to Pasir
Ridge was special indeed. 
Twenty years of visiting schools has taught me a
lot of things, but one fact gets reinforced every visit: Principals set the
tone of the school.  The good ones are out of their offices more than in,
poking heads in classrooms, attending assemblies and after school basketball
games.  They know the names of the kids, the parents, and who likely had
breakfast that morning.  The faculty comes to these principals voluntarily;
they know the names of their teachers’ dogs, spouses, and if their parents are
failing. Part counselor, part boss, always setting a standard for
professionalism.  I have to say, when I was just a parent, I had no idea
how the important the role of a principal is.  Some manage staffs of
dozens of people making sure that standards for learning are met right along
with cleaning the white boards when needed.  But over the years I have
learned.  It takes about 10 minutes for a
consultant to discern if they are walking into a healthy or an unhealthy
school, and undoubtedly, the diagnosis can be traced right to the principal’s
office.  In a world of great diversity
when it comes to principals, Seamus is a gem.
Turns out that not only should Seamus be giving
principal lessons, he is a poet!  Seamus
wrote us a poem for our final assembly. 
Not just a poem, an ODE. 
Ode to Our Visiting Poets
By Seamus Marriott
Poets pick their words for
clarity and prose
Crafting a bouquet for the
reader’s nose
They paint a picture and tell
a tale
They can make us happy or can
make us wail
Words are their tools like an
artist’s brush on the page
Embossed in the ink or even
digital in this new age
Our learning this week has
been rewarding and fun
And we are sad that our time
together is done
Thank you for enriching our
words and encouraging our PIPES
We will remember you fondly
and proudly wear our new poetry stripes
You have truly developed our
poetry lens
Best wishes from PRIS and all your new poetry friends.
Thank you my friend.

International School of Rumbai, Sumatra: Not just Monkeying Around.

 

Ever look out at the sliders, swingers and tag players on a
lively playground and think, what a bunch
of monkeys?

At the International School of Rumbai, playground monkeys
are not just metaphorical.  The school’s
campus, carved from the jungle by an oil company (now Chevron) 50 some years
ago has become a sanctuary for wildlife – short and long-tailed macaques,
 gibbons, monitor lizards – as the jungle
around the compound has been clear cut to make room for palm tree plantations. 

Although the macaques beat us to school in the morning, they
went back to their forest to nap while the students of Rumbai made poetry about
dim sum, recess, conflicts, people, places and experiences in and out of the classroom.  I don’t want to say that ONLY at an international
school might a first grader write a refrain poem about dim sum, because there
may in fact be a Chinese dumpling enthusiast in Houston or Salt Lake City.  I’m just saying I haven’t met one yet. This
is what makes working in international schools a constant surprise.
 
We wrote about what was real and closed our eyes to search our imaginations for ways to stretch our observations.

The classes are small and the school itself has only 65 students.  They come together every morning for a meeting and a few quick exercise moves lead by a rotation of students.  Teachers, imagine this: you teach for 10 or so students for the morning, walk home for an hour lunch and then come back for the afternoon?  People who teach at small schools such as this have made a quality of life decision to destress.
 

The middle schoolers gave us a percentage poem to help us remember them and then a second poem, explaining what our bus trip to visit their sister school in Duri. 
 

Thank you to all the teachers and students in Rumbai for a grand
and memorable visit.

Pasir Ridge International School

Coming around again to something brand new is traveling to a
foreign port and being met by familiar faces. 
Didn’t we meet before in Seoul? 
Didn’t we have dinner in Kota Kinabalu? I remember you from Cairo!
Michael and I have been on the international circuit long
enough that we are more certain to be greeted by folks we’ve met before than
not.  Still this trip was extra special
as this is the third time we have had the privilege of working for Principal
Seamus Marriott and his dynamic teaching wife Theresa.  First meeting in Wisconsin, traveling to work
at their school in Shanghai, followed by Cairo American College and now
Balikpapan, Indonesia. 
Pasir Ridge is a small school by any measure except quality,
where they are overflowing, stacked to the ceiling tiles and busting out the
windows. 
But, by far the best part of the week was Friday afternoon
assembly — they came with poems about
happiness, anger and frustration, from the points of view of slaves, sun bears
and the Empire State Building. They spoke with the kind of confidence that
comes from feeling safe, to parents, teachers and their classmates.  Every voice blending into a harmonious chorus
celebrating individuality. Thank you Pasir Ridge, Balikpapan.

Changing Perspectives

When Michael Salinger and I were teaching in Morocco, we were introduced to a new fashion trend.  Teen girls were wearing the shortest of short shorts over tights and patterned stockings.  They obviously had studied the student handbook, which probably said “no bare legs up to your bum” or some such language, and found a creative way to stay in compliance.  They saw their window, and they took it.

The CCSS are market driven, of that there is no doubt.  But much like commercials in between segments of a sitcom (say, the sitcom that masquerades as school reform) people will learn to live with them the same way we have learned to live with fast food, once size fits all, and bigger is better — with a healthy dollops of irony and skepticism and a little of what Michael calls middle school logic, “Hey, they didn’t say we couldn’t!”

So, until the next set of standards is cooked up to be stuffed down the digestive tract of public education, creative teachers will be heartened to find that although the CCSS don’t specifically mention writing poetry in the W strand, they don’t say you can’t write poetry as (say) informational text.  They don’t say you can’t write a poem to demonstrate understanding of point of view.  They don’t say you can’t write a persuasive poem.  What the heck is a persuasive essay anyway? Certainly that’s more of a stretch than a persuasive poem — persuasive essays don’t even exist off the educational verbal playground.  Poets have been trying to change hearts and minds since the days of foot-binding.  If it was the intent of the marketing folks who created these standards to eliminate poetry from the curriculum, the CCSS are a pitifully poor attempt.

In RIT 4, it says that students should “interpret words and phrases as they are used in a text, including determining technical, connotative, and figurative meanings, and analyze how specific word choices shape meaning and tone.”  But in the fine print it says, that these analyses will “serve as models for students’ own thinking and writing.”  In other words, it is in the reading standards that the CCSS recommend using poetry as writing models, not the writing standards.

That’s one window.  There are plenty of others.  Those of us who know that poetry works as a means to lead young people to a better understanding of their world need to remain confident that jamming poetry into the windows of these standards will help young people grow in both their communication and thinking skills.  Subversive infusions of poetry may even help kids on those bubble tests that no one has ever linked to success or happiness in life.  It remains part of our jobs to open the windows and let poetry work in to work its magic.

Baby Talk 2013

I recently wrote on a friend’s Facebook wall, joking about emotional displays in public, that I had thrown up while watching Bonnie and Clyde. True story, no flu symptoms. 

I have no trouble suspending disbelief in a movie. If someone sets a table for tea, I lean in to blow steam from the cup. When the bullets started flying into their roadster tearing Warren and Faye to pieces, I jumped around in my seat, taking it all to heart (and to the gut). That’s when it happened. Barf.


Fact is, it was 1967, I was a teenager and had never seen anything like that before on the screen. I’d seen Spartacus, but that was from a time, oh like, a couple of hundred years before 1967, right?

Sometimes at school visits I ask kindergartners if the have seen Star Wars, and 94% of them say yes (the other 6% are braiding each other’s hair, so this is not exactly a scientific sampling). This means they have seen bullets tear through bodies, dismemberment, decapitation, torture, and every type of mayhem very creative Hollywood brains can invent to visit upon the human body. Before they are six.

There is no putting this huge rhino back in the closet. It’s out there. But I wonder if we maybe need to be having some more conversations about it. Instead of laughing at each other when we cringe (yes, I still cringe and get laughed at) and admonishing each other to toughen up, maybe we need to talk a little to kids about the differences between film and reality. That head shots aren’t necessary, that people have families who love them and that’s one reason you never shoot first and ask questions later. That people are people and that real life isn’t a carny shooting gallery.

Michael’s son Frankie was a primary student  on 9/11/2001. A few days after the tragedy, he asked, “when will the bomb hit here?” We thought he understood, we thought he felt safe, we thought he wasn’t paying attention. He was.

Even though 1967 is to 2013 what 1921 was to 1967, kids listen when we tell them stories. When we tell them how it was and how it really is. Heros don’t spray the room with bullets and then get the pretty girl and live happily ever after. Being strong means to be able to say the words, “I don’t like that,” not get off a head shot.

 
When we take time to explain the difference between fiction and reality to kids, they get it. But we have to say the words. We can’t assume they already know or that they are not paying attention. At home, at school, everywhere. We have to say the words.

Frank and his brother Max grew up to censor movies for me, as in, “don’t come in here right now Sara, this movie will upset you.” Last weekend, my grandson Dan said something similar about a video game. This “protect Sara,” action has become a family story to chuckle about. 

Only, it’s not a joke. Not really. It is and should be a discussion starter.

This year my resolution is to follow up my question about Star Wars with, “you know, that really isn’t how most people settle fights. Mostly we don’t shoot and chop one another to pieces. Mostly we talk things over. Sometimes we even use poetry. Here, let me show you.”

 

Hate Was Not his Normal State

War is the Fiercest Art

The Luc
Bat poet knew

His country broke in two, therefore
He had to go to war.
His wife and child, heartsore,
waved bye.
The poet dared not cry.
He needed a clear eye to spill
Blood, strangers he must kill
To stay alive until the time
He could again in rhyme
Make images sublime. His heart
Was wracked and torn apart.
War is the fiercest art. Trading
Pen for gun, evading Death,
Armies invading. This hate
Was not his normal state.
One question would frustrate, for he
Knew not this enemy.
Might you love poetry?
     I, too.
sara holbrook
ed. Lee Bennett Hopkins
When Lee sent out the invitation to poets to write poems to chronicle each of the wars that America has engaged in over its lifetime, I remembered a story I had seen on 60 Minutes (as I recall).  It told the story of an American soldier who found a book of poetry on a dead Vietnamese soldier, poetry that he himself was writing during the prolonged tragedy that we call the Vietnam War and that the Vietnamese call the American War.
In the story, the American soldier traveled back to Vietnam 30 years later to return the book of poetry and a photograph to the Vietnamese soldier’s family.  I can’t find a link on line, but I remember wondering as I watched the narrative: what would that be like?  A poet called to war?  In the US, some men and women served, but most did not.  There were no such choices to be made for the Vietnamese as the war exploded all around them. The image of a poet does not come to mind when we think of Rambo.
So, doing my best to follow the Vietnamese poetry form, I wrote a Luc Bat from that imaginary (to me) soldier’s perspective, which now appears in Lee’s book, America At War.  Luc Bat (to my understanding) means six eight, alternating lines of six syllables, eight syllables, with each rhyme repeated three times, interwoven and snaking down the page to whatever length the poet chooses, rhyming the last line with the first.
Last weekend Michael Salinger, Nancy Johnson and I were having a quiet dinner in Ho Chi Minh City when our young waiter whispered that the man sitting at a table in the back of the restaurant was a famous poet.  The young waiter,  Ngô Tiêů Lân, had studied him in school.  He explained that the poet, Nguyên Quang Sáng  had traveled to the US to read his poetry.  The 23-your-old spoke with great reverence.  When we told Ngô Tiêů Lân that we too were poets, introductions were made.  Pictures taken.  Friendly nods and smiles exchanged while Ngô Tiêů Lân busily translated.
After we went back to our table, Mr. Sang slowly came over to our table.  He wanted to talk about how the US and Vietnam were friends now.  We need to come together, he said.  Move forward together, he said, bringing his fingertips together in a tent.  He does not like to think about the war, in fact he comes to this restaurant on Saturday night to drink whiskey and forget about the war.
Mr. Sang is the winner of the Ho Chi Minh award that is only given every twelve years.  He is the author of not only poetry, but children’s books, plays and movie scripts.  Not only did our young waiter know the significance of his contribution to Vietnamese literature, the desk clerks at our hotel were astonished that we had met him in person.  Where?  Where?  They wanted to know.
He is a poet who was a soldier because the times demanded it.
We paid for his whiskey.

Art for Malala

 
I received this email from a teacher I have corresponded with in Pakistan, who is looking to create the “the longest and most colourful card in the world’s history” for injured student activist  Malala Yousufzai.  Will you please help her reach her goal and have students email their artwork to her by October 20?  Read the letter below and it will tell you what to do.
I was introduced to Basarat Kazim by Margariet Ruurs and we are in the process of scheduling a SKYPE school visit with her students. 
 
Dear Friends,

I write to share with you news from Pakistan that has
saddened the hearts of all. On the 9th of October, Malala Yousufzai ,aged
14, who has been active in denouncing the closure of girls schools by the
Taliban in Swat in 2009, and who continued her education despite threats, was
shot in the head on her way back from school. Two of her friends, also in the
bus, were injured as well.

Malala epitomizes courage and allows all of us to see that
single acts of bravery can, and, do become movements. We are grateful to this
young campaigner for encouraging Pakistanis to stand up and be counted.

Alif Laila/IBBY Pakistan is setting up a library in Malala’s
school and has organized a KEEP SMILING card campaign for Malala and her two friends.
We aim to make this the longest and most colourful card in the world’s
history.  For this we need your active
support.

Please become a member of this campaign by encouraging  children to write messages and create drawings
that are full of hope and will make the girls happy, and hopefully, assist in
their recovery.  We also want them to
know how compassionately the world has responded to their plight and how they
are not alone in their struggle.

Please email us your contributions by the 20th of
October. Emails can be sent to:

aliflaila_lhr@yahoo.com

bmk_al@yahoo.com

Thank you for your time and support.

Basarat Kazim, President

Alif Laila Book Bus Society
IBBY Pakistan

Lies My Teacher (almost) Taught Me

I began by writing poems for my kids, envisioning a single collection for all ages, to be read by families, preferably fireside.
 

I have no idea where this fantasy originated since as a single parent, after I was done working overtime to make ends meet, after the kids’ play practices and homework, if we did sit down together as a family it was to watch reruns of the Cosby Show, not read a potpourri of poems for teens and toddlers. Family friend Betsy Byars straightened me out on that score; she told me if I could sort my poems out by age and subject matter, there was a chance I could get published. I snapped out of my fantasy world and followed her advice.

I mostly write about my own experiences and neuroses and have never been inclined to write forty poems about dinosaurs or holidays, poems that would cleverly fit into a single topic and therefore grade level lesson plan. However, I have done my best (with a whole lot of editorial assistance) to group my poetry by age level. A pouty poem such as “I Hate My Body” just doesn’t work for second graders, for instance. They may be able to decode the words, but the sentiment of the poem doesn’t catch up with them until adolescence.

Today I received the following email from a fourth grade teacher: “Question-what reading level is your poem, Lies? What age level is the audience of this poem? Please respond asap, thanks!”

I answered: “I have always thought that part of me was stuck around the age of 12 – I often find myself writing in a voice of that age. But I have to confess, that I have not even as an adult totally outgrown the sentiment of this poem. This poem is about putting on your game face instead of facing up to how you really feel. When do kids start to do that? I’m not sure.”

She responded: “Thank you!! I teach fourth grade and am required to teach this poem to 9-10 year olds…I am not finding they have the maturation for it….and I so appreciate your telling us what you meant when you wrote it. Thanks again!”

Required?

The word “required” makes my teeth itch.

The 9-10 year olds are required to read this poem?

She is required to teach it?

Whose fireside fantasy was this? That it would be beneficial for us all to be introduced by requirement?

I am developing increasing sympathy for the ghost of William Blake.

LIES

I got
burned, but

you
can’t say that I’m abused,

I’m
just down

and
feeling used.

My eyes
are dark

but
dry;

no one
knows

about
the lie.

I never
should have smiled

and
said

that
everything’s all right.

I
should have said,

“Hold
on,”

but I’m
scared to spark a fight.

When
I’m all buffed up

in
smiles

you
can’t say I’m victimized.

This
arson is my crime.

I set
fire to my insides

with a
lie,

a smile

that
let my hurting

hide.

©1997 Sara Holbrook

Walking on the Boundaries of Change

Hint: If you are required to teach this poem, begin by
asking kids if there was ever a time when their insides did not match their
outsides.